13/03/13

In today's lesson, our group all got check ups on our blogs and what we need to add before the deadline. We also showed Mr Phillips our distribution PowerPoint we had to do for our homework and also got feed backs on them. We did a bit of editing in class and also stayed after school for a bit to carry on with our editing. We are basically done with our editing but we are still having a few troubles with where we can put the flashbacks because we still cannot find a place where it is all continuous. We are meeting tomorrow at 10am till 1pm as it is academic mentoring day, to finish off our editing.